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Some people think that criminal behavior can have genetic reasons, while others believe that only circumstances can lead some people to crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #behavior #circumstances #crime
There are some arguments about what may cause the criminal
behavior
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 in a person: nature or nurture. It seems to me,
both
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 can explain the reasons
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 criminal actions. According to the view which depicts the genes are more important for criminal
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, some offenders are those that were nuts when they are
child
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 and were teasing their classmates or other children, so, they were complained by other people most of the time. These vicious criminals have a nervous heritability which caused them
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 anti-social
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.
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, these individuals often come from
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violent
family
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 with the same-acting members. These people start the criminal activities via
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petty
crime
 and develop their anti-social outcome to savage ones.
On the other hand
, advocates of the view which shows environment can push some people towards the
crime
, believe that these individuals were not born with a silver spoon in their mouth, so they need to provide their desires by themselves. Once they cannot reach
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their requirements even the primary ones, they encourage
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criminal performance.
Also
, some of them are forced to do an offensive or illegal treatment by their parents or family.
This
 kind of circumstance
lead
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 them to horrible crimes. From my point of view,
both
 genetic inheritance and environmental status could have
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 on
crime
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 rate. Some kinds of experiments on siblings show that
gene
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 can be a factor for penal accomplishments. In
this
 case, the siblings have an insane manner and harm others.
Furthermore
, the conditions where children are reared in is significant.
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population
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 mostly, experience domestic
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 and
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 not sufficient facilities to grow up healthy
both
 mentally and physically.
Therefore
, either genes or the bad situation can make offenders. In conclusion,
both
 views about criminal
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 would be correct. Nature and nurture are engaged in
crime
 generation. The family and society status can make
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 or destroyer nation as much as heritability.
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