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Happiness is very important in life. Why it is diffCult to define. What fartors are important in achieving happiness.

#happiness #life #diffcult #fartors
Happiness
 is everything in someone’s
life
. It’s more valuable than anything in
this
 world. It can make
life
 priceless.
In
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everyday
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, we prefer to earn
money
 for good living standards, better education of kids but we don’t focus to achieve
happiness
, we are so much busy in our daily routine that we forgot the meaning of
happiness
. Nowadays we consider someone happy if he/she has more
money
, higher education or a good
job
. There are few notable things which we should consider for a happy
life
.
Money
 is not everything it’s just part of
life
 we shouldn’t run after
money
.
Job
 is important but with a good
job
 we cannot buy
happiness
, we should maintain a work-
life
 balance. Spend more
time
 with family and friends. I would like to explain why these things are important in short. With
the
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,
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money
 we cannot buy
happiness
money
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in
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 not important for
happiness
. A good
job
 can bring us
money
 good lifestyle but if we give all our
time
 to the
job
then
 family
life
 could b disturb, we can lose friends and in the
end
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 we are left alone. 


There any many examples which I would like to share but I think a few of them are important to highlight. I have a good
job
, I spend more
time
 in the office and my office manager is very happy but all of
this
 is not making me a happy person. I wish I could spend more
time
 with my family and friend to achieve real
happiness
 .
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