In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.

Teenage is the most vulnerable and important phase of life. To protect teens, the state has deployed a curfew in some areas and adolescents must be accompanied by an adult if they still want to go out. I partially agree with the aforementioned for the reasons that are explained in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, the elevation of

crime

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scene

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and drug lords are proliferating at an alarming rate; strict actions and close watch on

these criminal

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this criminal

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are demanded in a bid to alleviate them. Thereby, by viewing all the circumstances, the authorities ordered

curfew

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a curfew

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in

some place

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someplace

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to shield the teens from

such

kinds of offences. Apart from that, some youngster gets

drug addicted

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under the impression of offenders.

For instance

, adolescents have frail minds and can

swayed

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easily in any direction, if youngsters are exposed to criminals,

then

it is almost arduous to get back them in

the

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regular life.

Thus

, to ensure the safety of young people, the government imposed restrictions on late night outings for them. Moving

further

,

teenage

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teenagers

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above

certain

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age limit

are

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allowed to work to bear their

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expenses

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expanses

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; they have to step outside according to their work schedule.

Therefore

, in

such

scenarios, the parents or other adult members of the family make sure to give company to their younger in order to save them from any mishaps. To conclude

then

, undoubtedly,

to ensure

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the safety of citizens is the prime liability of the authorities. Putting curfew in some places is just

a

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active action of the government to curb offenders and protect their teens from falling

in

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the trap of the wrongdoers.