An increasing number of developing countries are expanding tourist industries. Why is it the case? Is it a positive development.

A growing number of under-developed nations are enlarging their

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sectors.

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phenomenon, along with explaining why I believe

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to be an advantageous trend. The fundamental

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why developing nations pursue an enlargement of their

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industries is, without doubt, to increase economic activity. Greater spending by both domestic and international tourists will help to spur the creation of more businesses by the local inhabitants, many of whom are financially impaired, and as a consequence, local and national GDP’s will grow.

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is especially important for countries with few natural

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, and yet have historical or topographical places that may be of interest to

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. The knock-on effect on economic sectors

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as entertainment, transportation, and accommodation can

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be immensely beneficial. These benefits can have

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a powerful and positive impact on the lives

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local inhabitants that

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trend can only be thought of as being overwhelmingly beneficial. Despite the most notable disadvantage of increasing tourist business, that of environmental degradation, it stands to

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that the improvement of people’s financial situation should take precedence over all else. The recent health scare,

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, lays testament to the life-giving power of economic activity, where many poor people in developing countries who depended on

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for their livelihood, have now been forced to cease any type of business connected to the

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industry, and as

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, have slipped

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into

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poverty. In conclusion, it is without

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that the central

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for developing countries to expand

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industry is because of the need to increase economic activity. It is clear, in my opinion, that

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absolutely constitutes as being fundamentally positive, even though the environment may be negatively impacted.