The age of information and technology has taken a lot of people by surprise while it has become a way of life , others know very little about it and may be unlikely to learn .eventually we will have a polarized society and this will lead to serious social problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is irrefutable that nowadays,
technology
has taken over our lives.
People
are divided on the issue that it becomes a part of life while others think they
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not keen to learn .
Therefore
, it divides society on basis of digital aspects. I do believe that it would
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in some dangerous social problems but I
also
have some reservations which would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, in today's era of
technology
and globalization, all spheres of life are changing drastically.
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use of information
technology
is not an exception. There are ample
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reasons to justify that society would be polarized in upcoming years.
Firstly
, some portion of today's population is still unaware of ways to use
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and it would make their survival difficult in
this
globalization era.
For instance
, they
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do not
don't
know how to use
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to pay bills, search locations and for other uses in
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daily life.
Therefore
, they still prefer to be in lines which takes a lot of
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time and energy.
Secondly
, it would
also
put a huge impact on the business as they are not aware of different advertisement methods which are
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on social media platforms.
Therefore
, they
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would not
wouldn't
be able to promote their products to other parts of the country.
Hence
, it would ultimately affect their income. To illustrate it, a survey was conducted in 2018, which stated that 7 out of 10
people
prefer to shop online It is rightly said that every coin has a flip side.
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number of alternatives aren't
also
present to overcome
this
problem. Organizations and Governments keep it in mind and make special arrangements for them
also
.
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, during
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Government had made some booths for offline registrations for
people
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who aren't unable to book online for vaccination. In a nutshell,
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done a lot for
people
those
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do not
don't
know how to utilize the
technology
but
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of other population taking advantage of it really well. So, it would not be wrong to say that it is
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as well as
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society.
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