The children have unsupervised access to Internet and socialize with others that can lead to dangerous consequences
The
parents
are being criticized for giving children
unsupervised access of
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Internet
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the Internet
to
play games. In Fix the infinitive
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Internet
and how we can tackle Add an article
the Internet
this
issue.
Firstly
, without the supervision of parents
Internet
access can lead to dangerous consequences of
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for
children
due to the fact they can socialize with hackers and kidnappers that put them at risk personally and financially. Secondly
, children
visit paragraph Websites secretly as result
of it they become addicted to browse these sites and put Add an article
a result
bad
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a bad
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effect
affect
on their body and brain. Correct your spelling
effect
Thirdly
, they love to play games but some game
can be threatening. Fix the agreement mistake
games
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the life
children
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. Fourthly, Correct article usage
the media
children
may try adventurous sports and risky experiments which are viral on social media such
as jumping into rivers has taken life
of many.
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the life
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phenomenon such
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control options which
can be used and there are many Correct pronoun usage
that
softwares
are available that block and restrict unwanted materials.Correct your spelling
software
software's
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parents
should indulge with children
online activities, in this
way they can keep eye on them. The parents
can ensure they use inter for knowledge and entertainments purposes.
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Internet
is unsecured
place for kids where they encounter plenty of threatening situations. Add an article
the unsecured
an unsecured
Parents
should set time
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a time
limit
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limits
of
their use and keep eye on their Change preposition
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children
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
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- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
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- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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