tourism bringing environmental problems, what are the causes and suggest some solutions

Nowadays, travelling has become
favourite
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past time of
people
as in free time they love
travel
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to distinct places. But,
tourism
is a bag full of advantages and disadvantages as it sometimes causes environmental degradation.
I n
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the upcoming paragraphs, it is discussed that how
tourism
effect nature and what is
solution
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the solution
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to
this
problem
.
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Primarily, because of
tourism
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,tourism
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a group of
people
come to a place where they enjoy eatables and it is often seen that they throw the garbage on
roadside
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.
Furthermore
, for travelling to other areas at an individual's
convinience
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convenience
he/she prefers to travel by a private vehicle which causes different kinds of pollution.
For example
, recently after the ease of lockdown guidelines many
people
travelled to hill stations due to which there was congestion on the roads and these vehicles caused air pollution and noise pollution
also
.
On the other hand
, the advantages of
tourism
cannot
be ignores
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as it boosts the economy and is earning of local vendors. Due to
this
, it is necessary that government should adopt certain measures like imposing certain
penalities
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penalties
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on
people
who throw their garbage outside the dustbin.
Furthermore
,
there
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government can issue guidelines related to limit the use of
private
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the private
a private
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vehicle
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vehicles
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.
For instance
, in
Delhi
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there is
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an odd-even
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rule that means, on one day there are only those cars on the road
those
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have odd number plates and vice versa. To conclude, I would like to say that if
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government
governments
governement
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the governement
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come up with solutions to these problems
then
definitely,
advantages
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the advantages
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of
tourism
will outweigh the disadvantages.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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