Many countries consider eighteen-year-olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience.

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In most countries ,
eighteen-years-old
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is the age for a person to be considered
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adult
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an adult
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.
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is a
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where most teenagers who
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adults
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adult
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are conscious enough
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their actions and know the difference between good and bad . A person who
turn
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eighteen
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spend
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fourteen years in school where he or she is thought about
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society , how to live in a community, and how to make decisions according to oneself opinion.
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, in high school , teachers prepare us to face university by asking us about our future career and
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giving us knowledge about different the world .
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is where most teenagers
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students and are free to make
there
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own choices .
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makes them responsible and
self conscious
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of their actions .
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, according to biology, at the age of 18, male and female have
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their
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development, which
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their body systems reaching the level of maturity. At
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stage
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a
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teenagers are now considered
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apply
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an adult
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adult
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adults
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because their reproductive system is matured enough to start
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adulthood which is getting married and having children. To conclude, being an
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demand a mental
stage
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of decision making and being responsible.
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does not exclude the fact that our body appearance
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show
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our new
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of adulthood.
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