Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.
#individuals #future #leaders #influencers #home #countries #requirement #leadership #skills #support
The best sentence in my professional career is “from Zero to Hero”. My first challenge from the company was to lead a
team
in a rural Use synonyms
area
that I had never visited before. Through Use synonyms
this
journey, as Head of Representative Linking Words
Office
or Hero, I have learned about true leadership that faces any risk and inspires others to grow together for common goals. It comes from my zero experience in the telecommunication industry, Use synonyms
however
, I developed myself to become a good Hero for developing my Linking Words
area
during my professional career.
I have managed three different rural areas in the South of Kalimantan with limited resources which are five Use synonyms
sales
officers and 20 technicians. The challenge is to achieve Use synonyms
sales
, infrastructure, and finance targets. As Hero Kandangan, I must face that obstacle, lead my Use synonyms
team
, and maximize the resources to achieve the target. First of all, I should learn about the culture of the community in my Use synonyms
area
which gave me insight into how I can communicate with others. Improved relationships with the Use synonyms
team
through joint activities Use synonyms
such
as morning briefing, ceremony, and other activities. And Linking Words
then
conducted demand surveys for the network deployment plan. I have innovated for Linking Words
sales
improvement through social media and online communities so that even though I have a small number of Use synonyms
sales
officers, I can reach all areas. Use synonyms
As a result
, it increased Linking Words
sales
by 5.5% each month from online marketing. Use synonyms
Moreover
, my Linking Words
area
achieved Use synonyms
sales
, infrastructure, and finance targets set by the company and I got the best Head of Representative Use synonyms
Office
in Q2 2020 from my Use synonyms
office
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, there are other challenges to the cost-efficiency program from my company to the business sustainability. In Linking Words
this
current condition, my role as Linking Words
leader
of the maintenance division has to manage a limited budget efficiently but still prioritize customer experience. The activities I did were conducting an initial assessment of each program and evaluating the impact that will be carried out. Use synonyms
Next,
I hold a meeting with the Linking Words
team
to discuss the planning that will be implemented based on the results of the initial evaluation. Use synonyms
Then
, I controlled the execution of the work in the field. Linking Words
Finally
, the final evaluation was to assess the work ensure that the customer network is running well, and make lessons learned regarding budget efficiency. Through Linking Words
this
program, it resulted in 10% cost savings every month and the unit that I manage received the Best Access Operation and Maintenance of Telkom Regional Kalimantan in Q2 2023 from my Linking Words
office
.
In conclusion, a Use synonyms
leader
must be able to provide rational solutions in the midst of limited resources and encourage the Use synonyms
team
to achieve common goals. Use synonyms
This
experience has made me a future Linking Words
leader
in developing my Use synonyms
area
through telecommunication networks, with the support from Chevening, I hope it will increase my potential to be a great Use synonyms
leader
and make a greater impact through my studies.Use synonyms
Submitted by madekevinbratawisnu on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task response
You have exhibited a good understanding of the topic and have provided detailed responses. However, you need to make sure that your narrative clearly addresses the specific question. Focus on demonstrating how you are a potential future leader or influencer.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear logical structure—an introduction, main body, and conclusion. It nevertheless could benefit from better transitions to ensure a smoother flow of ideas. The use of linking words or phrases at the beginning of new paragraphs will also augment the coherence of your essay.
lexical resource
Your vocabulary is suitable and effectively conveys your ideas. Some sentences, however, are awkwardly constructed, so try to vary your lexical resource. A wider use of synonyms and a mix of simple and more complex sentence structures would enhance your essay.
grammatical range
Your grammar range and accuracy are generally acceptable, with minor mistakes. Remember, incorrect use of tenses can sometimes cloud the meaning of sentences. Keep your tenses consistent unless there is a change in time or action that needs to be indicated.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example