Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued by some that creating an international holiday to incentive the no-use of cars would reduce greenhouse gas emissions. Others claim there are other ways to mitigate
this
problem. The paragraphs below will outline both point
of Change to a plural noun
points
views
and expose why I think that creating a car-free day would not diminish air pollution.
There are two main reasons why part of society believe that do not Fix the agreement mistake
view
using
cars for a day would help to reduce pollutants. One of which is that fuel used in their motors, whether is alcohol fuel or gasoline, after combustion produces harmful volatile carbon gases which are released Change the verb form
use
at
the atmosphere. Another reason is that since Change preposition
into
industrial
revolution and car invention, air pollution has risen, Add an article
the industrial
thus
, it is reasonable to believe that stopping its usage would decrease carbon derivatives production and, consequently
, reduce purify the enrironment
.
In stark contrast, there are others attitudes that could be Correct your spelling
environment
practiced
that would undoubtedly be more effective in controlling Change the spelling
practised
atmosphere
pollution. Replace the word
atmospheric
First
of all, boycotting animal meat enterprises due to the fact that cattle, swine and even fish breeding farms are responsible for the majority of methane annualy
produced globally. Correct your spelling
annually
Secondly
, using clothes which brands work with sustainability seal. This
is because fashion
industry Correct article usage
the fashion
are
known to be the Change the verb form
is
second
most polluting market in the world, hence
, encouraging green brands is more effective to diminish environment
damage, including the air.
To conclude, in my opinion, investing in an international day to not use auto-vehicles is, indeed, a positive action. Replace the word
environmental
Although
, it is necessary an aggressive change in people's lifestyle
and attitudes to effectively improve the gas emission Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
at
the atmosphere. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, a car-free holiday, despite being creative and inspiring, is not as beneficial as stop eating animal flesh and using enviromentally
friendly clothes.Correct your spelling
environmentally
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