Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 the environment has degraded over a period of time and addressing some of these points by making
changes
directly in the AWS accounts will cause the environment
further
degradation. And, as
this
is not a
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issue (more of a governance and ongoing management issue), I am afraid that AWS support may not be able to help To resolve
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you need to review, make appropriate
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not cause any
further
issues. So, I suggest the following recommendations to fix
this
-Take
this
opportunity to adopt Control Tower to make
this
process consistent and ensure guards rails has been applied consistently across the accounts - Review the current AWS environments and make necessary
changes
in CF templates to address the gaps/inconsistencies Given It is beyond the architectural guidance, we recommend
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a partner/Proserv to help on
this
. And
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discuss
this
next
week together with Xavier and Lois.
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  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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