Some people think that children should follow their parents’ advice, however, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are opposing views about following parental advice by

children

which one group

is agree

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agrees

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with and the other refute

it

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apply

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. It seems to me,

children

must possess their own style to live. On the one hand, the advocates of parents’ advice

believes

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that the mothers and fathers recognize right from wrong more effectively. A case in point is that they know how to spend their money in a beneficial way or invest much more than the young.

Furthermore

, the parents are more experienced

such

that they have had several years to test variable situations in their

life

. Some of these experiences helped them to promote in their job or

life

and some fell them into trouble.

On the other hand

, the opponent may argue that following the sheer parents’ instruction has its disadvantages

such

as the fact that it destroys youth’s self-confidence and leads them to become independent when they grow up.

For instance

,

this

lack of confidence shows itself once they want to marry and establish their independent

life

from their immediate family, they will have many headaches communicating with their spouse.

Moreover

, following only parental guidance without taking any risks is likely to demolish the

children

’s innovation. The worst effect of

this

is the fear of doing anything new;

therefore

, there will be no improvement in the career,

for example

. From my point of view, while parents’ advice may depict a certain way to the

children

these kinds of guidance cannot make better members for society. Each person should have his or her own

life

-style by acting in their own way to be happy starting from their childhood.

Also

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the world is expanding via new events and facilities which our ancestors did not face.

Thus

we need more confident and dependent people with innovative ideas to match with new technologies and make the world a better place to live. In conclusion,

although

following in parents’ footsteps may assist

children

in their

life

, it may put down their independence which is destructive in my opinion