Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do agree or disagree ?
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children
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on
teachers
rather than their parents
after they join the school
. I fully agree with the above utterance as infant
spend more Fix the agreement mistake
infants
time
in school
.
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have influent their children
more and they become their role model. In other words
, parent
are the Fix the agreement mistake
parents
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their child from the beginning of Change the verb form
lives
the
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their
impacted
on Correct article usage
an impacted
child
. So Add an article
the child
a child
parents
also
influence their children
a lot in life.
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the view
agreement
, Add an article
the agreement
children
spend their quality of time
in school
and classes Correct your spelling
throughout
through out
the day with their Correct your spelling
throughout
teachers
. To elaborate it, in school
child
spend around six hours per day and they try to share their problem with the Fix the agreement mistake
children
teachers
. For example
, recent
survey was conducted by Add an article
a recent
Central
Education department in India, which results Correct article usage
the Central
into
around 80% of Change preposition
in
children
spend long hours in school
rather than home
. Change preposition
at home
As a result
, by spending more time
in school
student
get Fix the agreement mistake
students
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affected
effected
by Correct your spelling
affected
teachers
.
Further
strengthening view as teachers
are the one
who can judge the ability of the Correct pronoun usage
ones
student
and try to shape their career in the proper direction. To explain it, Add an article
the teacher
a teacher
teacher
can know the talent of Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
student
and they will teach them Fix the agreement mistake
students
accordingly
and give proper guidance in building better
future. Correct article usage
a better
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, a
Jim Barney the person who was Correct article usage
apply
good
architect. Add an article
a good
the good
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interested
in architect was seen by their teacher during their secondary Replace the word
interest
school
and due to the proper guidance of their school
teachers
along-with
his Correct your spelling
along with
parent
he became Add a comma
,parent
successful
architect. Add an article
a successful
Thus
, teachers
have impact
on Add an article
an impact
student
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
students
although
parents
are the first
teachers
of their children
even though children
spend more time
in school
. So, teachers
also
equally influenced the student
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