Some people believe that governments should invest more in protecting minority languages, while others think that this would be a waste of valuable resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Thousand of
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exist in the world. It is considered by many that for safeguarding them that
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spoken by a minority, the
government
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should allocate more
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, others think that
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would be a misuse of sources. I think that whichever
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are spoken, it should be preserved by the
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except for it spoken by a few
people
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. On the one hand, the minority’s
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are parallel to those’ cultures, and it includes their memories related to their ancestors.
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, preserving it used by minorities facilitates protecting their cultures, resulting in it contributing to cultural diversity in the countries and
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build in peace of society.
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, Indian
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whose
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is about extinction have improved and maintain it with the support of the U.S
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and either their existence is accepted or U.S society reach peace.
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, trying to maintain the
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that has a number of spoken
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below a certain value
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as a hundred is not useful.
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, rather than wasting
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for that reason,
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spend
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for improving their society’ wealth. Since these
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have not been used in any literature or among large tribes.
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, Black Sea Armenian is only used by four
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so the
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attempting to develop
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a waste of
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. In my opinion, governments haven’t a lot of budget for spending any trivial subject. Like being the evolution in nature, the extinction of some minority
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is inevitable.
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, it is not needed that every
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must be supported, and
government
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should choose which
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are protected. In conclusion,
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almost every
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must be saved by the
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, some
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do not need that protection because of their low number of spoken
people
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.
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