Using a computer everyday can have a negative influence on young children. Give some reasons to support this view.

Nowadays, the more society develops, the more

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technology develops,

hence

the necessity of

computers

for human life.

However

, some people think that using a computer has a negative influence on young

children

. In my view, it is evident that using it has not only disadvantages

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but

also

advantages On the one hand, I side with good conditions created by

computers

for learning and relaxing. To illustrate,

computers

provide youth with diversified methods for studying. Many websites are created to search

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information.

For example

, if the

children

have a problem with their project,

computers

are tools to help them.

Additionally

, after a hard-working day, they can listen to music, play

games

, watch films,

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Almost all websites and applications for these entertainments are free.

On the other hand

, using a computer can cause a few disadvantages for young adolescents.

Firstly

, using it every day may bring diseases of vision. The blue light from the screen of

computers

reduces vision and the sleep hormone.

For example

, if the

children

sit in front of the laptop for 2-3 hours, their eyes will be hurt and it is difficult to sleep at night.

Then

, the

games

on

computers

distract the study. Teenagers like playing

games

to the point they neglect their studies.

Moreover

, they forget to have regular meals or eat fast food without nutrition.

Finally

, young

children

’s mentality can be influenced by violent

games

or films. It is not easy to tell the difference between the real or virtual world. In conclusion, it is undeniable that

computers

are helpful for learning. But using a laptop excessively may create negative influences on youngsters. So,

children

should use laptops three to four times a week.