You want to improve your knowledge of foreign languages which can help you at work. Write a letter to a foreign language teacher. In your letter Where did you hear about the teacher? Why do you want to learn a foreign language? Ask some questions about the course.

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Dear Sir, The reason why I am writing

this

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letter is that I will have to learn

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Spanish

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language at

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level in a short period of time. I received your

contacts

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from your former student, Tom Black. He told me that you are

skillful

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teacher who has a method of learning

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Spanish

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language fast. As I wrote above, I will have to learn

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Spanish

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language fast. Since I have found a well-paid job in Mexico. If I can not manage to learn

Spanish

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within six months I will undoubtedly lose my profession. What's more, I have a few questions and I want you to answer my questions. First of all, How long does the course

last

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Secondly

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, include course prices in your reply letter. And final question, if you teach individual lessons, write information about them in detail. I am looking forward

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response. Yours truly, Billura

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Consider expanding on why learning Spanish is important for your job, as it adds depth to the task response.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity and coherence in your writing.

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In the greeting, use 'Dear [Teacher's Name]' if known, and sign off with a more customary phrase like 'Sincerely' or 'Best regards' for improved tone.

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The letter effectively explains the urgency of learning Spanish, which shows a clear motivation for the request.

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You have included specific questions about the course, which is a good way to engage the reader and show your interest.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

148 words

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