In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
Animal cruelty has been a debatable topic. Some believe that they should not be exploited in the modern era for producing medicines, and alternate
protein
substitutes are available to replace their nutritional value. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
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essay will mention why their usage cannot be stopped entirely as globally, a substantial portion of the population still rely on animal husbandry to make ends meet, and the food supplements replacing them are either expensive or not widely available.
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To begin
with, certain creatures should not be exploited anymore for the creation of drugs as alternate methods of producing them are available nowadays. Linking Words
Likewise
, killing them for our Linking Words
protein
requirements can Use synonyms
further
be avoided as nutrient supplements are now present in the market. In the past, snake poison was used for the creation of a sedative aimed at relieving pain. Linking Words
However
, nowadays with the advent of antibiotics, we do not have to do that anymore. Alternatives to chicken and meat are available in the form of soy Linking Words
protein
that a person can consume. Use synonyms
For example
, in Linking Words
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there are a number of painkillers and Add a comma
,India
protein
supplements available now that completely eliminates the need for our dependency on animals. Use synonyms
Therefore
, people who believe that Linking Words
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creatures need not be exploited anymore do have a valid point.
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Nevertheless
, many people globally are still dependent on animal husbandry for their bread and butter. Linking Words
Moreover
, the food substitutes to them are still not widely available and can be expensive. Population in the rural areas breed livestock and sell animal products to make a living for themselves. Linking Words
Furthermore
, soy Linking Words
protein
is not readily found in smaller towns and even if it is available, many people would not be able to afford it. To illustrate, my cousin brother staying in a remote village still relies on poultry and cattle to make an earning for his family. Use synonyms
Hence
, I strongly believe that we cannot eliminate entirely the need of certain species for our requirement of food, medicine or clothing.
To conclude, cattle being subjected to exploitation is a debatable topic. In the modern era, we have different options that provide us with the same nutritional or medicinal value and Linking Words
therefore
, it reduces our reliance on animals to a wide extent. Linking Words
However
, they cost a fortune and animal husbandry is still a widely Linking Words
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profession in many parts of the world. So, in my view, completely replacing these creatures is not viable.Change the spelling
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