Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled. They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

There is no doubt that only an
insufficent
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insufficient
amount of wastes from homes is reprocessed
instead
of fully recycling disposed materials.While some people believe that to solve
this
problem, government bodies should enforce recycling products as legitimate. In
this
essay, I will explain my view with an example.
One
problem is that as a human, we are producing more trash than reusing or destroying.
For example
, rather than using
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paper bags, many people use
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plastic bags as
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at home.
This
is an issue because even though both can be reuse but not every type of plastic can be recycled. To solve
this
problem, there should be
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law that every citizen should follow which will strickly force
one
not to utilize banned substances that can not be reprocessed.
For instance
, there are some countries that
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a legal requirement not to use unrecyclable products. Public Administrative should
also
apply a mandatory action where throwaways should seggeratte dry wastage like electronic devices,aluminium vessels,wrappers etc. from the wet waste like food,liquid stuff etc. At every building or household, there should be two garbage disposals ,
one
for dry and another for wet objects.
This
can ensure
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efficient way of reprocessing and utilizing elements from components
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later can be used for future redeveloping. To illustrate
this
point, electric parts can be fixed and applied in industries or
one
can create fertilizers from wasted foods. In conclusion, We can make mandatory steps for making use of wasted household objects which in turn can
also
solve
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important issues
such
as
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waste pollution which consequences all world is facing.But I
also
think that we should
also
educate and guide citizens, the importance of recycling.
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