Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel，To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, the effect that humanity is having on the environment is becoming ever-more important, and it is endangering the lives of future generations. Some argue that increasing the prices of

fuel

is the best solution.

However

, I believe

this

solution may work out in a way, but it is not the best and effective solution. When speaking of environmental

problems

,

air

pollution is considered to be the major and the most serious issue

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to be solved. Most countries with rapid increases in their level of urbanization are

also

nations with an increasing number of

vehicles

on

streets

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the streets

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. Because the size of cities is expanding, and the

vehicles

on streets are increasing with

population

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the population

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as well. The

air

pollutants mainly come from the greenhouse gases that

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out by

vehicles

, and the vehicle’s level of toxic gases emissions is linked to the amount of

fuel

consumed. If the

fuel

price becomes higher in the future,

then

people may be less likely to go out by

vehicles

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vehicle

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.

Thus

, the emission of

air

pollutants will reduce.

Nevertheless

, it can just alleviate the environmental

problem

in a way. The causes of global environmental

problems

are various.

For instance

,

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ocean pollution,

the

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plastic pollution and climate change.

Moreover

, the absence of

effective

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an effective

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and representative

government

exacerbates the environmental

problems

.

Therefore

, the

government

should raise the awareness of environmental protection of the citizens, which could help solve the

problem

at its root.

Besides

, the

government

should encourage citizens to use public transportation or eco-friendly

vehicles

. By doing

this

, I believe the

problem

could be solved effectively. To conclude, I agree that increasing the cost of

fuel

could help

alleviating

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the situation, since the

air

pollutants

come

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that come

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from

vehicles

are likely to reduce.

Still

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the

government

plays an essential role by raising the awareness of citizens about environmental

problems

. With the two solutions combining, I believe the whole environmental

problem

could be minimized in the future.