Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel，To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, the effect that humanity is having on the environment is becoming ever-more important, and it is endangering the lives of future generations. Some argue that increasing the prices of

fuel

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is the best solution.

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, I believe

this

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solution may work out in a way, but it is not the best and effective solution. When speaking of environmental

problems

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,

air

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pollution is considered to be the major and the most serious issue

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that remained

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to be solved. Most countries with rapid increases in their level of urbanization are

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nations with an increasing number of

vehicles

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on

streets

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the streets

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. Because the size of cities is expanding, and the

vehicles

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on streets are increasing with

population

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the population

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as well. The

air

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pollutants mainly come from the greenhouse gases that

given

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are given

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out by

vehicles

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, and the vehicle’s level of toxic gases emissions is linked to the amount of

fuel

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consumed. If the

fuel

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price becomes higher in the future,

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people may be less likely to go out by

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vehicles

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vehicle

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.

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, the emission of

air

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pollutants will reduce.

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, it can just alleviate the environmental

problem

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in a way. The causes of global environmental

problems

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are various.

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,

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apply

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ocean pollution,

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apply

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plastic pollution and climate change.

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, the absence of

effective

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an effective

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and representative

government

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exacerbates the environmental

problems

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.

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, the

government

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should raise the awareness of environmental protection of the citizens, which could help solve the

problem

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at its root.

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, the

government

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should encourage citizens to use public transportation or eco-friendly

vehicles

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. By doing

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, I believe the

problem

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could be solved effectively. To conclude, I agree that increasing the cost of

fuel

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could help

alleviating

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to alleviate

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the situation, since the

air

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pollutants

come

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that come

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from

vehicles

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are likely to reduce.

Still

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the

government

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plays an essential role by raising the awareness of citizens about environmental

problems

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. With the two solutions combining, I believe the whole environmental

problem

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could be minimized in the future.