Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do u agree or disagree?

It is indeed a fact that chopping the
trees
down in woods is a severe concern and can ensure the end of
humans
and
animals
. I certainly agree with
this
statement and
this
essay will discuss the reasons for my agreement.
Firstly
, Wiping off the rainforests
for
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to satisfy human needs can Rise the overall temperature of the planet.
This
is because forests absorb the water from roots which
is
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evaporated through leaf pores by which the
air
in the atmosphere remains cool.
However
, with the decline in the
number
of
trees
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the
air
will become warmer that will lead to a hazardous consequence that ensures the end of
humans
and
animals
.
For instance
, the increment in global warming due to the reducing
number
of
trees
is melting the glaciers across the world resulting in the rise of a sea level.
Hence
, no fresh water
to
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will be remaining for the survival of living beings ensuring their steady extinction.
Secondly
,
although
logging may satisfy human needs, the minimizing
number
of
trees
in forests will result in
a
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toxic
air
quality.
This
is because
trees
release oxygen and absorb carbon dioxide. By releasing oxygen,
trees
contribute
in
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minimizing the
air
pollution level and provides us
a
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breathable
air
.
However
, the existence of
humans
and
animals
would certainly become impossible as no fresh
air
would be remaining to inhale due to the minimizing
number
of
trees
.
As a result
, the living things will die by breathing toxic polluted
air
in a long run.
For instance
, the AQI of Delhi is 426 which contributes to the increment in the
number
of patients experiencing breathing concerns.
This
AQI used to be below 100 in older days when the greenery existed,
however
, human needs have declined the
number
of
trees
across the capital drastically. Conclusively, It is undeniable that
humans
and
animals
cannot survive by an adequate amount of water and fresh
air
to breathe and both are associated with the
trees
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in forests.
Hence
wiping the forest areas to satisfy our requirement is as similar as digging our grave.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sink
  • global warming
  • indigenous tribes
  • livelihood
  • displacement
  • cultural erosion
  • soil erosion
  • water cycle
  • humidity levels
  • rainfall patterns
  • droughts
  • ecosystem services
  • pollination
  • climate change
  • logging
  • rain forests
  • habitats
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