Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and that this is their parents fault others says that schools are to be blamed. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the current times, we have seen that young kids are at the worst of their behaviour. While a few people are of the opinion that the mother and father are the root cause for
this
, while some others feel that it is the school
institutions that are really at fault. In this
essay, we shall look into the role of both the parents
and the school
.
On one hand
we have the Add a comma
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parents
, who are falling behind in disciplining their child
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children
This
is quite evident when they try to satisfy every wish and desires
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children
. Further
, they also
do not impose strict punishment when thier
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For instance
, in a recent visit to the mall, we saw a child
that was throwing a huge tantrum so that his mom would buy him another toy. The parent failed to bring her son under control and make him realize that he already had a brand new toy. At
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this
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parents
that fail to imbue discipline raise kids with bad behaviour.
On the other
hand
we have our Add a comma
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school
institutions that are showing some serious lack of interest in the upbringing of the child
. For example
, teachers nowadays, are of the opinion that their only role is to impart education or knowledge to the children
learning in their class. As a result
, they tend to forget that the school
is the second
home for a kid and they fail to ensure that children
develop a good character along with a good education.
To conclude, we can see that parents
and school
teachers share some part in the misbehaviour of children
. It is my opnion
that, though teachers play a large role in Correct your spelling
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child
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children
and failing to do would make the parents
the root cause for a child
's misbehaviour.Submitted by lawrencemartin03 on
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