An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose

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Hello Anna, How are you? I hope you and your family are doing fine. I am very delighted to know that you are planning on visiting Uk. I thought I should give you some important information before you come

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so that you can make a better plan to deal with all the inconvenience. Most of the visitors like to come in summers to enjoy particularly on a beach, but, it's quite hotter and unbearable to tolerate heatwave. I suggest Autumn is the best time to plan a trip.

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time of year is a bit colder with sunny spells, And

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, a drop of rain. so you would definitely enjoy it more. I am sorry to tell you that I can't put you up at my place. I live in 2 bedrooms apartment and they are full. But don't worry at all, there are plenty of affordable options near my home. The best option for you is Airbnb's, they provide you comfort like your own home. you can

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look for a shared apartment. it is relatively cheaper but less spacious. you can

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find some affordable options online. I am looking forward to hearing from you what are your

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plans. Eagerly waiting for you! Best wishes,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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210 words

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An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose

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Large companies often use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that old people should take part in sport to stay healthy. Others think there are better ways for old people to stay healthy. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.