University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. What is the main advantage and what is the main disadvantage? Which do you think is better? Studying abroad or not
Today, there is an upward trend for
students
who go abroad for higher education. As they choose this
way, gaining experience in a foreign country
and culture becomes eye-opening, while getting used to it makes them sometimes having a hard time. What I believe is despite all the hardships students
can meet studying outside the country
even for a while can be seen as a journey to one’s true self.
The main advantage of studying in a foreign country
is that person can experience a new culture and the way of living from zero. After they left their country
, students
may start to learn the complete opposite side of things done in another country
which later on leads to get to know themselves more deeply as these people discover their unknown characteristics. For example
, when my friend studied in Italy in spite of her introverted personality, she often found herself in a situation that pushed her to leave her shelf and being more open to the outside. This
eventually helped her to be more comfortable with others. As can be seen, learning to live in a new country
encourages people to do unusual but beneficial things for their future lives.
From the other perspective, studying overseas can be quite difficult to adjust to the new environment. Also
, if a person has a different race, some societies may not allow them to blend in. It is commonly believed that racism is still the case in other countries. Indeed, during the pandemic period
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students
got threats because of the belief that they have coronavirus. The significant obstacle for international students
is the foreign people’s attitude toward them that is
not controllable.
To conclude, international students
continue to study overseas for completing degrees from different countries. The main problem for people going through this
, is the difficulty to adapt sometimes, however
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,however
students
may take advantage of living abroad as it is a lifelong experience. From my point of view, it is better to study abroad, even though foreign students
can be marginalized.Submitted by sismayilova00 on
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