In some countries young people have become richer, healthier and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
In a certain number of nations,mortals are wealthier, healthy and are living for ages in early age
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, youngsters are earning good money at an early age by some sources from the internet, like some kind of apps are paying more just for some simple tasks. These things make them rich but by spending a lot of Linking Words
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on social media they are going away from their families and neighbourhood that gives them homesickness. Use synonyms
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, some companies pay overtime for working late nights that causes lack of sleep and gives stress to youngsters and they become sad in their lives. For illustration, In a survey conducted in ,,2020 it was shown that by working more hours employees were earning more money and a good lifestyle but they were sad because they didn't have spare Linking Words
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but not least, everyone is opening their own business and spending a lot on that which needs Linking Words
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but it makes them bored by doing the same thing every day.
Moving forward, some measures and be taken to withdraw these problems. Use synonyms
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of all, the government should make some new rules about the limitations regarding working hours so that people can spend some Linking Words
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with their family and friends that will keep them happy as well as healthy. Use synonyms
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, young ones can start doing their interesting activities along with their working hours that will give some relief their burden of work. Linking Words
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, interacting with new faces around them will give something new and interesting to learn that will be helpful financially and mentally.
In conclusion, it is true that money makes a man happy but it cannot be applied everywhere, a person needs to be physically fit and mentally strong that will be just because of happiness. So it is necessary to stay happy in young life by adopting some measures.Linking Words
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