The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reason for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

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These days, there is a piece of evidence about reading books in youngster has decreased in later years.
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. The most important thing is adolescents love playing with their parents, friends and teacher.
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to learn from technology like cell phones, computers, laptops which can illustrate and
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has a lot of clip videos that are for learners who want to know about information in the school or others. Prachanda, who is a programmer that prepares the lesson, knowledge, expert in English, Mathematics, Science etc., shows a number of the account from people who under 15 years old is using
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will not cause the minor to bored. As I mentioned it before that the adolescent love spending time with a surrounding person. In order to raise the number of these, I recommend reading with members of the family will make more fun with reading and can increase bonds inside their family. At the end of the day, it seems to me that the youth pay attention to outside activities. If the youth read booklet with their parents or siblings, these will increase the number of young readers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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