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Some people say it’s a waste of time when plan for future.It’s more important to focus on present.Do you agree or disagree?

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It is plausible by some people that
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 planning is
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-consuming. They believe that concentrating on the current
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 is more valuable. In my opinion, I believe that planning for the
future
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 saves a lot of
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 and
effort
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 for the present and
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. In
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 essay, I will outline the reasons why I believe so. 
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 with, planning for the
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 makes someone takes the right decisions at the
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 being for the upcoming plans. Despite the fact that you might spend more
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 now but
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 saves a lot of
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 in the forthcoming years.
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, by knowing what I want to do
next
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 in my career, I can start preparing for it now by taking more specialized courses or applying for an upgraded position
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 or just waiting for the
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 when I feel outdated and get skipped in promotions. The more
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 spent in planning now the less
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 and
effort
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 needed for the
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.
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,
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 planning always keeps the person with a backup plan. A plan B is always needed in any career for any unfavourable changes that might happen.
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, someone can lose his job at any point in
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 due to unexpected circumstances. By saving money for the
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, someone can sustain
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 difficulty till he gets another job. Not only
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 but
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 the more he gets prepared for the
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 market change the easier he can get in another better position. To sum up, despite the
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 spent on
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 planning in the present
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, the consequences are priceless in saving a great hassle in the
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. The more we plan for the
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 the less stressful our life can be. Is not it worth the
effort
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?

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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