Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this?

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there. So doctors advise old
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citizens
to do more exercise while they do not care to the doctor usually.
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to several causes like fear and pain that
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are solved by more attention to them.
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impact on their body.
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, their families and authorities should try to help them that they do not injury if do physical activities.
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to them which need more activities like gardening or even cooking. َ
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can
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more health facilities for
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resident by low cost or free that it
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adjust of the level of healthiness
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them like multivitamins and others
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in societies are belong to young citizens like gyms and parks because
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it, older one prefer to stay at home and reading or watching TV
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time with those who are
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same age.
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should
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new institutes which are
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to older people and not only they can socialise
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there but
also
do some
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suitable
activities for their age like
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yoga
or even mental exercise like chess.
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, local parks should be
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that it help to older spending more time in parks routine. In conclusion,
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men and women when
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older tend to stay at home and
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physical
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activities
activity
, they should do more
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exercises
exercise
to their healthiness.
however
, they need more motivation to
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enhance
life expectancy and should be helped them to sure about treating if
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have some injury.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • motivation
  • physical limitations
  • lack of time
  • fear of injury
  • exercise facilities
  • misunderstanding
  • benefits of exercise
  • social support
  • poor health conditions
  • awareness
  • appropriate exercises
  • guidance
  • financial constraints
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