Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this?
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the country
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of older
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apply
citisens
to do more exercise while they do not care to the doctor usually. Correct your spelling
citizens
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the aging
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ageing
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increase
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getting
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consequently
consequences
thus
, their families and authorities should try to help them that they do not injury if do physical activities. for example
, their children can deligat
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delight
delegate
task
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government
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prepare
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the older
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helps
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among
medicen
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medicine
medicines
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the facilities
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of going out. they need to be motivated Correct your spelling
instead
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to spend
as
same age. Add an article
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the government
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specific
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also
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suitable
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or even mental exercise like chess. Correct your spelling
yoga
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, local parks should be Correct your spelling
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equipped
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the aging
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aging
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ageing
resident
that it help to older spending more time in parks routine.
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residents
Although
men and women when geting
older tend to stay at home and Correct your spelling
getting
less
physical Add a missing verb
do less
activites
, they should do more Correct your spelling
activities
activity
exercies
to their healthiness. Correct your spelling
exercises
exercise
however
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enhance
their
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