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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In
this
 contemporary epoch, the trend of certain innovations and
automations
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automation
 has gained ground.
Majority
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 of the denizens assert that updation in technology will certainly substitute the newspaper and
magzine
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magazine
 articles.
Although
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 I strongly agree with
this
 notion, some things cannot be ignored. Relevant points will be discussed
further
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this
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of
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rationales to support
this
 ideology.
Firstly
, development in technology makes
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certain things easier and cheaper. To elaborate, since the
autonation
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AutoNation
automation
 is easy to access, everybody can even unprivileged society operate e-books.
Furthermore
, with the assistance of
machinery
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 anyone can read
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books and articles or even news while travelling.
Thus
, in
short
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 span of time citizens can know about what's going on in the society or around them. One good illustration for
this
 is that, a study by Pune University in which it was concluded that 60% of
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 population of India has adopted the latest updation in automation for daily purposes
instead
 of going for newspapers. Moving
further
, in the present era, everyone
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in
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 their hectic schedule
accordingly
 they do not have time to read books,
however
 by operating e-books one can save their time.
Besides
this
,
information
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 given is authenticated by the native's nation administration.
Hence
, it is safe and trustworthy to use. Despite
this
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 aforementioned reasons, there are some constraints to
this
phenomena
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.
Initially
, those who are preparing for competitive exams are in need of newspapers because they
contains
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the
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elaborative information about a particular topic which will eventually aid them in better understanding. To conclude, even though, there are some demerits of
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, they are eclipsed by the merits.
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