There are some people believe that the internet connects people, while others think this isolates people. Discuss both view and your opinion.

In the present age, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the

internet

has positive or negative effects on human life. Some people argue that the

internet

is a new version of communication and is able to

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the bonds between individuals. While

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many others believe that it prevents people to have more

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in person. Personally, I am in favour of the primary view. On the one hand, some individuals assert that the

internet

increases connections among the population. It could be said that it provides a way to communicate with others wherever you are.

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, by using

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trend you are able to send an email to your family to say congrats on

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new year eve while there are living in a different place.

In other words

, the

internet

makes it easy to keep in touch with our beloved persons all the time. 

On the other hand

, many people think that, nowadays, most

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individuals especially youngsters prefer to use mobile phones and surfing the web

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a meeting with their friends and have some funny hours.

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teenagers

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have an Instagram account with a huge number of followers but in real

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they have only one or two close

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friends

. More precisely, the current generation is not aware

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how to make new strong friendships and

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leads to feeling

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in their difficult days. To sum up, I would conclude that the

internet

is beneficial

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different levels

however

, there are some drawbacks as well. On top of that, it could be said that like other trends it needs to be controlled and be used in

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positive ways. Clearly, it makes our life more convenient and we are able to communicate with family and friends via emails, video calls, and etc.