You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college adminisllator. In your letter • say which part-time course you booked • explain why you need to cancel your booking • ask about booking a different course Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to let you know that I am enrolled in the "Python for Data Analytics" program.

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, The course itself is well organized.

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, there are certain challenges

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my hectic routine. Hopefully, you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. I have been working on two jobs spontaneously for the past three years as a data analyst.

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I have a job in person with the forest department.

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, I have a lot of freelance work to do.

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, I have got some deadlines from my freelance employer for certain tasks which I need to address in the upcoming quarter.

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, would you like to withdraw my application for the said course?

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, I want to inquire whether is there any program offered by your institute that addresses SQL query performance. Because it is a high-priority

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for me. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Haris Khan

Haris KhanWed Dec 20 2023

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Make sure your letter has a clear structure with separate paragraphs for the introduction, each main point, and the conclusion. Your writing has a fair logical structure, but could benefit from more explicit connectors and transitions between ideas.

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For task achievement, ensure that you address all prompt requirements in sufficient detail. You did a commendable job of explaining your situation and request but could provide more details about the new course you are interested in.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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