You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college adminisllator. In your letter • say which part-time course you booked • explain why you need to cancel your booking • ask about booking a different course Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to let you know that I am enrolled in the "Python for Data Analytics" program.
Although
, The course itself is well organized.
However
, there are certain challenges
due to
my hectic routine. Hopefully, you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. I have been working on two jobs spontaneously for the past three years as a data analyst.
First,
I have a job in person with the forest department.
Then
, I have a lot of freelance work to do.
Moreover
, I have got some deadlines from my freelance employer for certain tasks which I need to address in the upcoming quarter.
Therefore
, would you like to withdraw my application for the said course?
Furthermore
, I want to inquire whether is there any program offered by your institute that addresses SQL query performance. Because it is a high-priority
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for me. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Haris Khan
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coherence cohesion
Make sure your letter has a clear structure with separate paragraphs for the introduction, each main point, and the conclusion. Your writing has a fair logical structure, but could benefit from more explicit connectors and transitions between ideas.
task achievement
For task achievement, ensure that you address all prompt requirements in sufficient detail. You did a commendable job of explaining your situation and request but could provide more details about the new course you are interested in.
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