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In some countries , the government promote public transportation and discourage the private vehicles what are the advantage and disadvantages?

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It is true that the government of many countries had been supportive they populations for immune by public transit of
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 private cars as many cities in the world are heavily congested.
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 essay will discuss what I consider the benefits and drawbacks of encouraging people to use transit services. The traffic problem is one of the most serious issues many huge cities around the world are facing.
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, in Bangkok it could take more than two hours during rush times to drive to a place located only five kilometres away ,
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, there are many advantages that governments can take to reduce traffic congestion. One of the approaches is to provide adequate public transports
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 as trains and buses,
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 people will become less dependent on their vehicles.
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, there are some disadvantages of promoting public transport. The biggest issue is the government have to allocate its immune budget to investment for the construction of new public transport.
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, It is impossible that their populations have to pay higher taxes for transport consumption, making the public travel service more expensive.
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, in the Shinkansen in Japan, train tickets are expensive, some people opt for a taxi or their individual car. To sum up,
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 it has become more benefits for communities that the government support the public transit, it has bought about some drawbacks.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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