Discipling a child is the responsibility either father or teachers.Do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued about who thak the prsiposibility to
discipline
the kids, the
parents
or
teachers
?
However
, some people say that they both should take the duty to
discipline
the
children
.
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essay
is totally
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this
statement and discuss the support points. There are several reasons that support my point of view.
Firstly
, father and mother are
children
's
first
teacher
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between the Zoe to three years old
stage
, they learn words, behaviour, time maintains from
parents
.
For example
, some
parents
did not
discipline
their
kid
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well in the early
stage
,
thus
lead the
children
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bad behaviour when they are in school.
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caused some difficulties for the
teacher
who teaches the kids.
Therefore
,
parents
should take the serious responsibility to educate and have to be a good influencer for the baby because they learn and copy what
parents
do.
Secondly
,
teachers
and
parents
should cooperate to
discipline
the
children
during the school
stage
,
such
as time management, avoid peer's bad behaviour influence, because those things are significantly affected
children
's future. According to recent research point out that, many students are lack of
self management
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and influenced by another schoolmate,
therefore
,
parents
and
teachers
should guide the
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in a healthy way. And
also
it shows that
children
who monitor well by their
parents
and
teacher
will develop better abilities than others. To sum up,
parents
are
children
's
first
teacher
which can shape their
teacher
in the early
stage
and
teachers
is the
second
developer for them to gain the knowledge for their future. So I believe both
parents
and
teachers
are important to give them the guides and take the responsibility.
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