today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extend do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any revelant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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people
tend to consumed products with high prices Use synonyms
in
social media due to better offering and marketing strategies and Change preposition
on
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this goods
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these goods
which
are purchased not Correct pronoun usage
apply
necessity
. I Add an article
a necessity
agree
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onagree
toagree
withagree
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statement in my essay I will explain many ways.
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To begin
with, adults who are surfing Linking Words
in
online to look Change preposition
apply
their
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at their
currently
needs and come across Replace the word
current
the
variety of Correct article usage
a
advertisement
in many kinds of subjects. Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
For instance
, with Linking Words
increasing
number of influencer in Add an article
an increasing
the increasing
Instagram
most of them represent what she wear today or even what she eat or drink today. When youngsters and followers saw that the posts her share immediately, they search Add a comma
,Instagram
in
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on
website
. Correct article usage
the website
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this
kind of sharing things are always with high sales and Linking Words
people
who are saw buying even they do not need because of the impact on themselves.
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In addition
, individuals who are living Linking Words
far
distance countries Change preposition
in far
such
as Linking Words
oversea
trade online and it takes time but they accept Correct your spelling
overseas
to
waiting. Change preposition
apply
For example
, the platform called Amazon doing significant marketing and sometimes slightly discount Linking Words
in
some products. My best friend just Change preposition
on
last
week bought a dress that she will wear on her prom night. The price was extremely Linking Words
to
much Correct your spelling
too
also
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model but she Add an article
a good
the good
order
on advice. Change the verb form
orders
On the other hand
, in a survey published recently in Onedio 69 Linking Words
People
out of 100, said that they are buying Use synonyms
stuffs
that they Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
are not need
for their daily life.
To sum up, with growing social media candidate Change the verb form
are not needed
people
curious about the what celebrities wear drink or eat and closely follow, Use synonyms
therefore
the amount of money they spend increased day by day.Linking Words
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