TASK 2: Grandparents play a big role in the bringing up their grandchildren. Do you think it is useful for grandparents to be involved? What is your opinion

As a result
of busy modern ,life parents are not the only people involved in upbringing a child nowadays
grandparents
have a big part in raising
children
. I think having more help especially from close relatives can have a positive effect on kids. As is said above close relatives like
grandparents
can be so helpful for
children
being raised. ,
currently
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in most families both parents are working and having extra help from their parents can be helpful for the kids to be sociable.
For instance
, in a typical Persian family, the mother will be home after lunch so if the kids are with their grandmother and grandfather in that time they would have more human interaction and
also
it is safer for them not to be by themselves
although
this
can be done by a nanny or a keeper as
grandparents
are related to the kid they feel more responsibility toward them. From another point of view, interacting with infants is an excellent way for the elderly to feel more energetic and alive so playing with
children
are actually benefiting both the
children
and the
grandparents
. One good example of
this
is the new urban design policy which indicates that it is better to have a kindergarten near every retirement house as
children
bring joy and energy and can result in vitalizing the area and making a better atmosphere for the elderly to live in and help them feel younger. In conclusion, not only having
grandparents
to look over the
children
is beneficial for the
children
but
also
it has positive effects on the
grandparents
themselves.
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