Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population. discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Some people feel that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals. While others have contrasting views and they argue that it would be best if resources are used for the human population. And
that is
because they are concerned about the discomforts they face in a day
to day
life like traffic problems and many other issues. On the other side, people supporting wild animal protection is because these creatures are becoming extinct with
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at
increasing
rate. Both the views are quite understandable and I will discuss them in Correct article usage
an increasing
this
essay. In my opinion, I firmly believe that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals.
To begin
with, it is very important to spend funds on protecting undomesticated beings. This
is because these untamed beings are all alone in the forest trying to fend and save themselves from potential dangers like bushfire, earthquake, tsunami, drought, etc. Unlike mankind
they cannot express their pain and fear. Add a comma
,mankind
Therefore
, it is our responsibility to protect them before them
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they
diappear
. According to recent reports and Correct your spelling
disappear
news
many undomesticated beings have become extinct. Add a comma
,news
Thus
it is high time we safeguard them before there are no creatures left on the planet. Because if that happens the entire world will be destroyed.
On the contrary
, there are lots of issues in our day
to day
life which should be fixed using this
money. For instance
, due to increased population
there is congestion problem and Add a comma
,population
also
immense pollution in the cities. This
can be solved if money is put in
rail construction. Change preposition
into
Likewise
, placing more garbage bins around the cities. Building more houses to solve accomodation
issues.
To conclude, it is more crucial to put in money in safeguarding untamed animals as they are on the verge of extinction. As mentioned earlier in the essay, I hold the view that rescuing and fending for these creatures is major as Correct your spelling
accommodation
that is
not only for their betterment but also
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