Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population. discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some people feel that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals. While others have contrasting views and they argue that it would be best if resources are used for the human population. And
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because they are concerned about the discomforts they face in a
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life like traffic problems and many other issues. On the other side, people supporting wild animal protection is because these creatures are becoming extinct
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rate. Both the views are quite understandable and I will discuss them in
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essay. In my opinion, I firmly believe that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals.
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with, it is very important to spend funds on protecting undomesticated beings.
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is because these untamed beings are all alone in the forest trying to fend and save themselves from potential dangers like bushfire, earthquake, tsunami, drought, etc. Unlike
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they cannot express their pain and fear.
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, it is our responsibility to protect them before
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. According to recent reports and
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many undomesticated beings have become extinct.
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it is high time we safeguard them before there are no creatures left on the planet. Because if that happens the entire world will be destroyed.
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, there are lots of issues in our
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life which should be fixed using
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money.
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, due to increased
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there is congestion problem and
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immense pollution in the cities.
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can be solved if money is put
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rail construction.
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, placing more garbage bins around the cities. Building more houses to solve
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issues. To conclude, it is more crucial to put in money in safeguarding untamed animals as they are on the verge of extinction. As mentioned earlier in the essay, I hold the view that rescuing and fending for these creatures is major as
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not only for their betterment but
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for ours.
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