In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of ageing populations.
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medicine
ehancements
which have been, Correct your spelling
enhancements
as a
result
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,result
life
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of life
Community
are living longer and it may lead to some issues in the future. Add an article
The community
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the ill effects caused by Remove the preposition
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this
scenario and provides solutions to tackle with
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situation.
Firstly
, the main problem is to have too many old people in the same country. Indeed, the young generation must pay Correct your spelling
oldest pensions
oldest'pensions
. To provide a clear example, whether there Correct article usage
the oldest'pensions
is
too many retirements to satisfy, the children of today, will Change the verb form
are
must
pay a huge amount of money to take care of their ancestor. Remove a modal verb
apply
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Moreover
More over
, having an old population, might have some real issues. Correct your spelling
Moreover
For instance
, during presidential
election, the vote of the oldest is seriously substantial. But they Add an article
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a presidential
have
not the same view of the world Add a missing verb
do have
than
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as
Then
, they can choose some choices which are not profitable for the future of their offspring.
Otherwise
, there is probably some measures which might be taken in order to avoid such
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disappointment
also
drawbacks. For example
, in the society, having less
retirements Change the quantifier
fewer
poeple
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people
,
it would force everyone to work longer. Remove the comma
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Also
, a law, which would forbid to vote
after a certain age, will not be accepted in society, because it might attempt to humans Change the verb form
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right
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rights
Hence
, it is largely tricky to find an accurate solution.
To conclude, having an old community could slow down the system, because of their old point of view. But there is
no Change the verb form
are
actually
, amazing measures to deal with Replace the word
actual
this
. It is a difficult balance to find between their obvious rights and problems
they cause. Correct article usage
the problems
However
, we must remember that they have, all of them,
acted to build the world we are living in today. Remove the comma
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Hence
, we must let to
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