In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior? What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays,
teachers
are struggling with students
behaviour
which has an impact on the school education
system. This
essay will examine the main cause of bad conduct from students
and possible solutions to this
problem.
The two main causes of students
bad behaviour
are Poor home education
from parents
and a lack
of relationships between students
and teachers
. Education
is the key for oneself to survive in a society which also
has an impact on our behaviour
. Our education
determined who we are . Because based on that, we make choices and decisions and also
build our principles. Students
who lack
education
from their parents
learn from bad influences or from school .For ,example a student, whose parents
main priority is work, gives less attention
and spend less time
with his child .This
can push the child to get his attention
elsewhere, like with friends, spend more time
on the internet which can affect his behaviour
. The second
point is the lack
of relationship between teachers
and students
. Students
spend most of their time
in school, that means teachers
also
impact their life . A negative attitude from a teacher can push the student away. This
can make the students
to lack
confidence or to rebel because they are not treated as they wish. For example
, a student who is always treated wrong gives a negative attitude.
Some possible solutions to this
problem is first
, parents
spending more time
with their children. This
will help parents
to know more about the children behaviour
. The way they think , the mistake they make and when to correct them , which also
give certain self-confidence to them. Secondly
, teachers
are to be good listeners and pay more attention
to students
. Some students
face certain issues at home like Parents
divorcing , some are been raped and also
morally abuse. Teachers
who build a strong relationship with their students
can easily detect when their attitudes change. This
can help the teacher to find out solutions in order to help his students
to get him out of his situation.
To conclude, our parents
and teachers
behaviour
affected students
lifestyles. Parents
and teachers
should pay more attention
to students
conduct to easily detect if there are been influenced positively or negatively.Submitted by Birguit Avagbo on
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