Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about the right and wrong. Other people consider the main responsibility of the parent is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some feel that the

countryside

is more conducive to a healthy lifestyle than the city. Though

cities

offer

a modern hospitals

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, I am in agreement with

this

sentiment as the

countryside

encourages greater activity. Those who believe

cities

are healthier point out the access to superior medical care. In most

cities

, it is possible to find a variety of hospitals specializing in subdivisions of medicine and staffed with the best professionals.

This

is a result of urban populations, the demand for care, and the earning potential of

cities

.

In contrast

, in the

countryside

, there are fewer hospitals, with less modern facilities located

further

apart. An individual with a chronic

health

problem would naturally prefer to be in closer proximity to their primary healthcare provider.

Similarly

, in the event of an emergency

such

as a car accident or heart attack, being in the city guarantees a higher chance of receiving quality care.

Nonetheless

, the situations above are exceptional and most individuals benefit more from

an

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active life in the

countryside

.

Cities

residents are becoming increasingly sedentary and passive as the internet and services

such

as food delivery applications enable less activity. In the

countryside

, individuals are more likely to walk to school, spend time with friends outdoors, play a variety of sports, and work a more physically demanding job. All these small instances of activity combined over the span of days, months, and years contribute to better overall conditioning and

health

.

This

applies to physical and mental

health

since

those outside

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of

cities

are less likely to be dependent on technology and suffer from concomitant anxiety disorders. In conclusion, despite the modern medical facilities present in

cities

, the less passive living in the

countryside

makes it healthier generally. Individuals who prioritize

health

should strongly consider living outside of an urban area.