Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about the right and wrong. Other people consider the main responsibility of the parent is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some feel that the

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is more conducive to a healthy lifestyle than the city. Though

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offer

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, I am in agreement with

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sentiment as the

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encourages greater activity. Those who believe

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are healthier point out the access to superior medical care. In most

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, it is possible to find a variety of hospitals specializing in subdivisions of medicine and staffed with the best professionals.

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is a result of urban populations, the demand for care, and the earning potential of

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.

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, in the

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, there are fewer hospitals, with less modern facilities located

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apart. An individual with a chronic

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problem would naturally prefer to be in closer proximity to their primary healthcare provider.

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, in the event of an emergency

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as a car accident or heart attack, being in the city guarantees a higher chance of receiving quality care.

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, the situations above are exceptional and most individuals benefit more from

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active life in the

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.

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residents are becoming increasingly sedentary and passive as the internet and services

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as food delivery applications enable less activity. In the

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, individuals are more likely to walk to school, spend time with friends outdoors, play a variety of sports, and work a more physically demanding job. All these small instances of activity combined over the span of days, months, and years contribute to better overall conditioning and

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.

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applies to physical and mental

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since

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of

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are less likely to be dependent on technology and suffer from concomitant anxiety disorders. In conclusion, despite the modern medical facilities present in

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, the less passive living in the

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makes it healthier generally. Individuals who prioritize

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should strongly consider living outside of an urban area.