In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, the Internet is taking a large place in our common lives. Indeed some people support that in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or

book

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because everything will be online.

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topic.

Firstly

, many people think that books will stay and will never

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replaced because there is

such

a huge difference between reading on a screen or on

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real paper. Indeed, a book is getting older with

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owner. The reader benefits

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more liberties with

this

For instance

, when somebody is turning a page of what he is reading, he is able whenever he wants to write some notes at the bottom of

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page.

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,as these objects are materials,

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tell us a story, but not only what it is written, there is a

backround

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background

with

this

. Sometimes, papers are

mooving

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moving

from hand to hand, until it falls on someone and

change

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his life.

Suprising

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Surprising

is not it? But real and it may only happen with real things. On the other side, a smartphone

have

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more diversities. To give a clear example, it can contain thousands of different types of literature

such

as biographies, romantics , actions,

science-fictions

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science-fiction

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histories or novels .

Furthermore

, it does not take a sizable place to keep all of these.

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, it is less personal and

provide

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a more cold feeling.

Also

, having access to any news we want is crucial but

whithout

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without

money, it would not be possible whether everything would be online.

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only reason

that

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some communities are not wealthier enough to pay these. To conclude, I believe that we need to print newspapers and do not read all the

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information's

informations

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online because

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the feeling is stronger when we really touch something. But especially because the culture must be affordable on several supports for

thus

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those

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who do not have enough money. In the following years, the world will change but I hope we will not forget how essential are

papper

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paper

books

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are.

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