In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry? Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Although
agriculture is being considered as one of the most prioritized
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in many states, still
hunger
is
also
considered as one of the crucial unsolved concerns all around the globe. In
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essay, I will discuss what are the main
reasons
for
this
phenomenon and possible solutions for the same. There are a plethora of
reasons
why still world leaders could not resolve a burning concern like
hunger
. Two of the main
reasons
are the expensive food products and poor facilities given for cultivators or farmers. When the food items are going through the chain of supply it always ends up as an expensive product due to the monopoly of the market and unnecessary handshakes.
This
will
finally
result in two or three times the real price of the product.
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cases farmers have to keep requesting proper infrastructure and facilities to deliver the agricultural products on
time
. Most of the governments of the developing countries had failed to cater
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critical
reasons
there are some short and long term solutions to get out of
this
situation. If the
governmnets
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governments
government
can make sure there will be a fair distribution of
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agricultural
products throughout the country
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while breaking the monopolies and
unneccessary
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unnecessary
handshakes
then
the final consumer price will go down. So, that will be a door opening for more population to consume food which will reduce
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hunger
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extent.
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the same
time
if the farmers can be given the needful facilities on
time
, so they can cultivate and deliver the goods to the supply chain on
time
without any trouble. In conclusion,
although
there had been many smart moves made in agriculture, the world had failed to get rid of
hunger
. But if the
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relevant
authorities can actually move to ground level and provide some feasible solution we can sort out
this
problem to a certain extent in near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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