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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve the problem?

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Amidst the increase in a struggle to manage waste properly and efficiently, individuals nowadays are less likely to recycle various products imposing a threat to the environment and future population. The key reasons behind
this
 and possible solutions are discussed in
this
 essay.
Although
 the general mass knows the benefits, very few are keen to recycle or take responsibility to do so.
Firstly
, the
process
 is strenuous, especially for those working on the lower tier of the supply chain. Slightest residue, contaminants left in products
such
 as shampoo bottles can disrupt the entire procedure.
Moreover
,
such
 a
process
 is water expensive, leading to depletion of the groundwater table.
Secondly
, products made after the
process
 are not always accepted because of the difference in quality standards. For elucidation, FDA in the USA allows the use of remanufactured goods only after the criteria has been approved.
However
, certain initiatives taken upon an individual level to educate the workers, improve their skill and ability to segregate wash and manage waste properly can up to a certain extent resolve the issue.
Additionally
, government interference can radically transform the current issues. Issuing clearly defined guidelines, objectives to companies involved can mutually benefit. Startups like Banyan Nation can with the help of administration efforts disrupt the present market. So to conclude,
although
 it is less convenient for rural workers to engage themselves in the
process
, a shift in the skillset, mindset can eradicate
such
 an issue unfolding many advantages later on.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • apathy
  • environmental impact
  • passive attitude
  • recycling infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • accessible
  • disposing
  • awareness
  • participate
  • incentivizing
  • motivate
  • tangible
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