The best way to prevent people from smoking is to impose high taxes on tobacco products. In this way, people will be less likely to develop a long-term addiction to smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The greatest solution to stop
people
from smoking
,
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is to increase the fee on cigarette materials. As the result, it will decrease the
number
of
smoker
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smokers

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in the future. It is undeniable that
money
is the main factor of human life, some
people
do not have much
money
to spend
for
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buying tobacco.
Therefore
, perhaps it will lead to less
number
of
addiction
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addictions

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in
a
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the

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long-term
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.
To begin
with, a major reason that there will have some impacts from increasing taxes
of
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tobacco products is
money
. It is apparent that
money
can run almost
systems
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all systems

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in the world.
Consequently
, if there any policies to charge more expense in cigarette, there will be some groups of
population
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the population

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that will have no ability to afford.
Finally
, they will try to stop smoking because their outgoings are limited so they have to save their funds for other things which are more important than
this
activity.
In addition
, according to less
number
of
people
who are likely to smoke, commercial businesses which are related to tobacco production will get a substantial impact because the sale will decline. It is undeniable that if there are
smaller
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number
of a customer,
therefore
, the business will not run smoothly because the product is
not
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longer needed.
Furthermore
, from
this
result, they will be a trend to stop producing and stop doing
this
business in
final
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the final

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. In conclusion, I personally agree with
this
because it can be easily predicted that if the tax will become more expensive,
people
will try to stop smoking because their budgets are not enough to support
this
expense.
Finally
, there will be less of
proportion
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the proportion
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of
people
who are likely to smoke and commercial businesses will not receive appropriate profits so they
finally
stop.
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