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Today some people have to work away from their family. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

#people #work
The given pie charts compare information about the proportion of working and non-working
people
 in the Philippines during the years 1932 and 1992. Overall it can be depicted that the percentage of
people
 employed in industry and service sectors were more in the years 1932 and 1992 respectively.
On the contrary
, the ratio of individuals engaged in government and agriculture and fishing sectors was less in the former and latter years. As can be illustrated from the charts, the ratio of unemployed
people
 decreased in the latter year, it was accounted to 25 per
cent
 earlier which decreased to 10 per
cent
 in the later period.
Similarly
, the population engaged in agriculture and fishing and industry sectors
also
 reduced to 8 per
cent
 and 15 per
cent
 respectively.
On the other hand
, the contribution of
people
 working in government and service firms increased to 15 per
cent
 and 52 per
cent
 in the later year from 3 per
cent
 and 15 per
cent
 respectively.
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