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Nowadays, it is common to find

people

from rural areas migrating to larger towns in search of better employment opportunities and to avail urban amenities.

However

,

this

trend

can affect their adaptation to the lifestyle

as well as

the rising living cost.

This

essay will discuss both the merits and the demerits that are associated with

this

trend

.

To begin

with, the principal reason for relocating to the

cities

is the ample placement opportunities available in towns. As the

cities

are

centre

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of trade and commerce, they provide

the

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people

with easy employment and

hence

the

people

shifting here

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can benefit

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this

trend

.

Furthermore

, the urban amenities,

such

as the emergency health care units are a boon for especially the elderly

people

in the families. They can rely on them at any hour of the day.

For example

, my neighbours who shifted the town

last

month had an urgent medical requirement when the elderly lady in the house fell on the kitchen floor and had some serious injuries.

Due to

the availability of the hospitals even during the night, they could get her treated right on time.

Hence

, migration does bring some benefits to the

people

coming to the big

cities

.

On the other hand

, despite the upsides of

this

trajectory, the drawbacks cannot be undermined.

Firstly

, the living cost of the

cities

is exorbitant and can burn a hole in the pockets of the bourgeoise (

middle class

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) society.

For instance

,

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house rent in

cities

like Mumbai and Delhi is skyrocketing,

this

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means that a major part of the

earning

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is spent on

rents

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and commute

not to mention

the daily living expenses.

Secondly

, to keep up with the fast-paced

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lifestyle of the city, one needs to put

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efforts

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than they would in rustic town life, disrupting their social patterns.

To conclude

, I believe that

this

trend

of migration is debatable. Though there would be contentious

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opposing

this

. I regard

this

as a positive sign.