Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are advantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays, it is common to find

people

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from rural areas migrating to larger towns in search of better employment opportunities and to avail urban amenities.

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,

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trend

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can affect their adaptation to the lifestyle

as well as

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the rising living cost.

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essay will discuss both the merits and the demerits that are associated with

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.

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with, the principal reason for relocating to the

cities

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is the ample placement opportunities available in towns. As the

cities

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are

centre

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of trade and commerce, they provide

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people

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with easy employment and

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the

people

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shifting here

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can benefit

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trend

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.

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, the urban amenities,

such

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as the emergency health care units are a boon for especially the elderly

people

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in the families. They can rely on them at any hour of the day.

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, my neighbours who shifted the town

last

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month had an urgent medical requirement when the elderly lady in the house fell on the kitchen floor and had some serious injuries.

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the availability of the hospitals even during the night, they could get her treated right on time.

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, migration does bring some benefits to the

people

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coming to the big

cities

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.

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, despite the upsides of

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trajectory, the drawbacks cannot be undermined.

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, the living cost of the

cities

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is exorbitant and can burn a hole in the pockets of the bourgeoise (

middle class

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) society.

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,

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house rent in

cities

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like Mumbai and Delhi is skyrocketing,

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this

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means that a major part of the

earning

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earnings

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is spent on

rents

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rent

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and commute

not to mention

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the daily living expenses.

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, to keep up with the fast-paced

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lifestyle of the city, one needs to put

extra

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efforts

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than they would in rustic town life, disrupting their social patterns.

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, I believe that

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trend

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of migration is debatable. Though there would be contentious

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opposing

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. I regard

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as a positive sign.