Some people say the government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In recent years, some parents indulge their
children
’s every whim without considering the consequences. In fact,
this
overindulgence can cause deleterious impacts on
children
, with them growing into irresponsible and materialistic adults. It seems
this
kind of nurture is prejudicial to
children
development. Through providing
children
with everything they want,
for example
, a surfeit of toys, rarely do they understand the value of their possessions.
Therefore
, not only do they take them for granted, but
also
they would not be content with what they have already had. They would, meanwhile, be at risk of having a short attention span as they have too many things in sight. Another negative aspect of
this
manner is that If they do not acquire discipline, they will not understand that there are consequences for their actions. Overindulgence has long-term repercussions. One obvious issue with
such
manner towards
children
is that they are being taught consumerism culture which can lead to lifelong problems, growing up to focus only on consumption. it stands to reason that it will inevitably result in an increasing rate of disposal, impacting the environment. It has been argued that materialistic tendencies
also
affect people’s well-being,
such
as decreased life satisfaction. Another drawback is that they would be self-centred adults who do not care about anyone else. In conclusion, I subscribe to the theory that
this
nurture would not have any positive implications.
Children
’s characteristics would be adversely affected by that, and there is a high likelihood that they become negligent in their future lives.
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