Traditional food is undergoing great changes and is being replaced by new diet. What do you think are the reasons and what do you think about this phenomenon?

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Traditional food is undergoing great changes and is being replaced by

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diet. The major

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behind it

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the modification in people's taste. I personally feel it is the main reason but there are other explanations as well. In the

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I will explain all the causes concerning the event. In my opinion, I firmly believe that

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phenomenon has more negative sides compared to

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positive ones.

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with, the variation in customary cooking is linked to the contrasting choices of people. With time, folks felt

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to include alteration in their cooking. The findings of new spices and herbs intrigued them to try new and prepare new dishes. Dishes like burgers, pizzas and many more which replaced the long-established ones. The public started preparing meals according to their likings

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of following the conventional ways.

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, some

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more spices in their food while others liked

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or sweet dishes.

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contrast is what motivated people to try new diets which ultimately replaced the long-established ones.

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, the divergence in

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is causing customary aliment to disappear. The young generation

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not know about their customary cuisines due to modifications. They say, " Food connects us to our roots". But since it is being ripped off we are no longer connected.

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, it is resulting in young folks

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more inclined towards junk diets as

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the aliment they have eaten since forever. According to many reports and news,

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event is causing an important part of our heritage to disappear. At the same time promoting bad eating habits. To conclude, the phenomenon concerning the replacement of conventional meals with

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diet is unacceptable. As mentioned earlier in the essay, I absolutely oppose the

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as it has many downfalls compared to the benefits.

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