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Some people think that parents should set strict rules for their children if they want them to succeed in life. Others think that strict rules are not necessary for children to obtain success. Which do you think is better?

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Parents every
time
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 worry about their
children
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 and think about how can help them to be successful in their future
life
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. Some think that strict rules are necessary for
children
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 and lead them to success while others disagree with them. In my idea,
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 though regulation has some benefits for
children
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, it has several significant drawbacks. On the one hand, when parents set strict rules in their home and all families should do those;
firstly
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children
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 learn discipline in order to do regulated tasks.
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, they can use their
time
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 better and learn more things occasionally
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 of wasting their
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 every day.
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, some fathers and mothers have to their
children
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 go to bed and wake up at an exact
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 every day that it is the primary rule for having discipline in entire of
children
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’s
life
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.
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, some
children
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 ought to learn many extracurriculars in their free
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 that some of them could be beneficial for their future.
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, these two advantages can bring success for
children
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 frequently.
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, if
children
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 have to do many regulation tasks, it is like that they cannot make a decision for their
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 and it is
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 with independence which plays a key role in success.
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, imagination and geniuses may disappear in
children
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life
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 because of cannot choose what they want to do.
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, sometimes,
children
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 like to learn some skills like dance or acrobats but their parents think that learning these things are not essential for them and even are not appropriate while, maybe they are talented on
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 skill. To conclude, some regulation is necessary for all people but tough one should be avoided especially for
children
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 because can make them disappointed and even make some weakness people in the future that can not be successful.
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