Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that high school students should be engaged in voluntary
services
to the
society mandatorily. I totally agree with Correct article usage
apply
this
idea and will discuss my reasons in this
essay.
Firstly
, one of the reasons I think students should be actively involved in unpaid community services
is that it prepares them for tasks in the future. While children
still live with parents/guardians and have little or no need for extra money, they should be made to render services
like keeping the surrounding
clean, working with charity organizations etc. by so doing, they learn the act of working and gather up experience that will be useful to them later. An example of Fix the agreement mistake
surroundings
this
is a renowned librarian in new York named Thomas Billy who spent his free time and holidays while in high school helping out in a library, keeping books and arranging in their respective shelves for free. Today he is using that skill set he had and is paying off as a librarian.
Secondly
, I feel pupils should be involved in voluntary acts like teaching younger children
because by
teaching, they are being taught. Add the comma(s)
,by
That is
, when people are obligated to pass on knowledge to the upcoming, they strive to know it better and be good at it and when they teach it, they unconsciously get better at it and have fun alongside. For example
, a school boy
in Zimbabwe who enjoys teaching younger students how to play chess emerged as a champion in a national chess competition in 2010. Correct your spelling
schoolboy
That is
to say, more children
should be engaged in services
like these in schools.
To conclude, a number of people feel children
should be engaged in free works for the community as part of their educational curriculum and I totally agree with it because it helps them learn better and also
prepares them for the life ahead.Submitted by idoghojennifer on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite