Museums should display art of their own country or they should display art from all our the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Museums

are the collection of archaeology

which

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studies

about

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the

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human activity

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though

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the recovery and

analyse

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of material culture. Archaeology can be considered both social science and

branch

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the branch

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of humanities. Now, the question

arise

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about the display of

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artwork

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art work

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artwork

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of their own

country

or all over the

world

. In my opinion, the government of

country

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a country

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should make

facility

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facilities

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for both

kind

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kinds

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of

museums

.

Firstly

, the

museums

which

shows

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the art of their own nation are

history

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the history

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of a particular region.

For example

,

last

year I went to Rajasthan where

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had an opportunity to visit different forts. Each

forts

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has its own museum which

provide

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information about their kingdom and kings, how long their dynasty was, in

domain

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the domain

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who was their

cabnet

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cabinet

members and what strategies they used to tackle their troops.

Additionally

,

museums

of their own land remind us of our great and rich culture and heritage.

Hence

, the

museums

are essential to

remind

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us of our past and history.

Secondly

, the

museums

which exhibit the art of the

world

is

the

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huge success for the government of the

country

because collecting information and materials from around the

world

requires

lot

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of men work, time and energy. Things which are collected in international

museums

gives a vast knowledge to our society about their different cultures of the

world

.

For instance

,

european

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European

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countries have

very

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a very

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different

style

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and

way

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of living as compared to north

american

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countries.

Moreover

, these

museums

helps

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us to generate more revenue which is very beneficial for the development of the

country

. So, these

museums

are indispensable to understand

different

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a different

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culture

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cultures

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and to make income. To conclude, countries should focus on both kinds of

museums

as each and every museum has

it

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own importance in

an

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unique way. People learn different

kind

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kinds

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of new things which will be helpful in their future.