Museums should display art of their own country or they should display art from all our the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Museums
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are the collection of archaeology
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studies
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the
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human activity
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though
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the recovery and
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of material culture. Archaeology can be considered both social science and
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the branch
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of humanities. Now, the question
arise
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about the display of
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artwork
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art work
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artwork
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of their own
country
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or all over the
world
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. In my opinion, the government of
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country
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a country
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should make
facility
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facilities
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for both
kind
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of
museums
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.
Firstly
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, the
museums
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which
shows
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the art of their own nation are
history
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the history
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of a particular region.
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,
last
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year I went to Rajasthan where
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had an opportunity to visit different forts. Each
forts
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has its own museum which
provide
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information about their kingdom and kings, how long their dynasty was, in
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the domain
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who was their
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cabinet
members and what strategies they used to tackle their troops.
Additionally
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,
museums
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of their own land remind us of our great and rich culture and heritage.
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, the
museums
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are essential to
remind
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us of our past and history.
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, the
museums
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which exhibit the art of the
world
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is
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huge success for the government of the
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because collecting information and materials from around the
world
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requires
lot
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of men work, time and energy. Things which are collected in international
museums
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gives a vast knowledge to our society about their different cultures of the
world
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.
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,
european
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European
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countries have
very
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different
style
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and
way
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ways
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of living as compared to north
american
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countries.
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, these
museums
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helps
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us to generate more revenue which is very beneficial for the development of the
country
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. So, these
museums
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are indispensable to understand
different
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a different
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culture
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cultures
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and to make income. To conclude, countries should focus on both kinds of
museums
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as each and every museum has
it
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own importance in
an
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unique way. People learn different
kind
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kinds
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of new things which will be helpful in their future.
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