IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not?

#money #friend #harm #damage #friendship
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Many people claim that supporting a
friend
Use synonyms
 financially can damage the
friendship
Use synonyms
. I do not agree with
this
Linking Words
 statement because true
friendship
Use synonyms
 is not based on
money
Use synonyms
 but rather supportive and trusting . Why do we keep friends if not for moral support and help?We all have partners to whom we can turn whenever we are in need especially during a critical moment .
Moreover
Linking Words
 , what makes it even special is the fact that she will do the same in a reverse circumstance.
That is
Linking Words
 why it is called
friendship
Use synonyms
. Giving
money
Use synonyms
 to a
friend
Use synonyms
 does not harm the relationship but rather strengthen the bond we have . I think a true companion is someone that lift me up when I am in crisis. It is true that borrowing
money
Use synonyms
 from a
friend
Use synonyms
 can make you feel septic because you are not sure if he is capable of paying it back . That is where the level of trust comes in and as much as I am concerned, I believe that a true relationship is based on trust . From my personal experience, my
friend
Use synonyms
 always comes to me whenever she needs financial support because she knows I will always be there for her and I know her moral values. Like someone,said: « A
friend
Use synonyms
 in need is a
friend
Use synonyms
 indeed ». To conclude , a true
friendship
Use synonyms
 is not based on
money
Use synonyms
 but rather on mutual interest.Helping each other , morally, been supportive and financially present when we are the most in need is the true meaning of
friendship
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by Birguit Avagbo on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: